RandomDanceOfHappy's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Greensleeves (Hardstyle Rmx)]

needs more eq work and mastering and a brake down alot of stuffs nice but theres a handfull of things that make this song seemed rushed

[The Human Dreamweaver vs Deplo]

to much reverb
instraments sound like they could be clearer
there is no bass that i can hear with headphones
melody is nice
and song structure is good
i honistly would love to play around with this XD

AyzanNightbane responds:

Thanks for the review. It's one of the few times I decided to alter my usual arrangement style. I'll keep working to improve my musical style and I hope I can make even better sounds in the future. About playing around with it; sure, knock yourself out. But don't forget me. ;)

[Twice More]

needs drums :3
the lpf dips to low at parts(prob sounds better with headphones)
the melody and pad vs of the melody feel randomsometimes threw out the song

[Peace After Death]

really good for improvised :p would like it to be louder

CGA-999 responds:

Thank you! I thought it sounded good relatively soft, but I guess others would like it louder, and I really do value others' opinions, so I will make pieces that are more loud.

["Shadow's Blade" - Intro]

this is really good let me start by saying that
eq work needs touches
intro sounds need to be a tad quiter
work up sound before 25 is to loud also
39 hi hights to loud
39 theres drum hits that need to be louder (the hits that hit on the beat)
1 00 drums need to change rythem a bit more then they do
1 24 this was done perfectly
127 sword sharpening sound needs a tiny bit of eqs to bring out the sound
1 38 need to lower the sound slightly (still louder then the rest )
thats all i think is wrong with this song witch is not much really
r4r :p
hope this helps this songs really good

XayberOptix responds:

Thanks for the granular review! I'll consider all these points when I revisit this tune. :)

[Japaneast West]

i think this would be really awesome with some really grimey bass and harder drums then agen it would sound alot like gunmetal black
after 1 10 it takes a vary intresting turn not sure how i fill about this part

abrasounds responds:

Grimey bass, hm? Yeah, good idea, thanks!
Gonna try making these changes in the future. :D

Thank you for the review!

[Parallel and Simultaneous]

okays so overall this songs really well done
a few things bother me tho the songs drums are a bit low fi and need to be slightly eqed to bring out the sound a little bit
the saqs lead is a bit louder then everything and feels to loud to me
the ambient starts really nice but when it gets faster it sounds happyer tone
but the background synth is darker and grimey witch gives u this off set sorta filling
sorry about the grammer and trypos hope the review helps

abrasounds responds:

Hey there!
Thanks for pointing me those things. Now that you say I can notice that the sax is a bit too loud, I might lower the volume a little.
I only disagree on the drums thing, I think that the lofi drums glue with the song quite well. But it's just a case of taste.

I'll try to work on the points you've said. Thanks a lot for listening and making a review! :D

[Joyzer]

there is lots of stuff that bothers me in this song
first thing is it dosent sound like it fallows a key or anything just a bunch of random notes
the glitces dont seem to match up with a tempo so its odd
around 3 mins it changes compleatly and dosent fit
the melody sounds good around 4 mins but the background is vary off
theres a few kicks at the start that sound like there cliping or vary muffeld
i do like the instraments used in this song as a hole but i fill like there is a detuned saw that dosent fit well
hope u dont take the massive amount of spelling errers to badlv im only doing this to try and help :p

Daru925 responds:

I'll choose useful feedback over grammar any day. Thank you!

[|R|Chaos of Space]

i dont have my headphones on but it dosent seem to have much bass . i do like how it sounds vary analog tho melodys are nice wish the kicks had a bit more punch to it o.o

Radiationator responds:

Yeah, this song kind of lacks in bass. I started it a long time ago and got it stuck in my head, so I never could come up with a good bass part.

Thanks for the review :)

[[Pokemon Tower-]*]

few days worth of 5s off of me finly got time to review love the vocs at the start only thing i dislike was the 8 bit ish synth with the arps as filler dosent fit in with it to my ears other then that everythings perfect~ the arp after the drop is more fitting could use more violens and orc stuff like that insted ~

Solkrieg responds:

Noted! Thanks for the review :).