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RandomDanceOfHappy

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the leads a little weak for hard style ~ still vary nice :3

not sure what to say since its so short
that blip at the vary start i dont know what thats about
the drums are vary simple and could use morealayers
the snare role u used sounds off beat and vary random lvs might wanna work on that

when it starts the second work up the bass line should change on the 4th pattern aswell
leads sounds fairly preset might wanna change them fx a lil to make it sound a tad better
and ided like to see where this goes after the workups!

lewis1994 responds:

Yeah i have no idea why it did that blip at the begging, ill take all your points on my next track, thanks for the review!:)

yo dog i hear this is a remake of a remake. so dog imma hook u up by remakeing this remake of a remake. so u will have a remaid remake of a already re maid song. dog

Solkrieg responds:

Naw dawg, this is a remake of another remake that was remade from this techno remake I remade from the original. So this is my like... 4th remix? Glad you enjoyed it X).

drums :p i liked everything but the fast snare sounds it stands out to me without my headphones that they are robotic! other thin that its all good :p so flusterd partss solo sounds famil ! ided like more timpo changes ! :D but overall really nice work :p

the 512 is for renderings for way :p forever go i told u to make a song like this is a great start :p so much to be done tho;p

kicks gotta little pop to much treb in the leads sounds scratchyyy :p some off notes threw out with such a high lead idk how lyrics would sound good might wanna change the lead if u get lyrics.

RessurectedGir responds:

I didn't try to make this an absolute masterpiece. Thanks anyway!

to much is outta tune for me :p makes me fill tone def i could only take the intro thin skiped and still outta tune so ya :p no likey

:p should have the sounds split in the end so i can take each sound so i could make the hole sound with the same drum kit :p normal kick pat the hi hat is intresting :p

RessurectedGir responds:

Edit: oh, I see what you asked. Hm. Too lazy for that right now. :P

nice sound its a bit to slow and the kick dont got nof pop like the panning in it :D 247 is a wtf moment i dont like how it jumped up was smoth and dident fill in beat :p

RessurectedGir responds:

...I think what you're saying is that it wasn't subtle enough at 2:45? Maybe I should bring in a build-up synth there. thanks!

i like the kick it repeats a little much thooo like the break down :D ay 1 30 ish could use a new drum pattern likeee kick.. kick snare and what not more of a hip hop beat :D some instraments need reverb .

D34DM4N responds:

Good lord you're right... way too repetitive.

I 've just fixed it, gonna upload the fix in a minute :]

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