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only thing i can see makeing this better

is play with panning more , filter works nice! kicks are nice! sounds like its lacking a touch of bass! 2 30 + needs a bit better break down and wind like impact sound playing with filters and panning and a sharper lead around 3 30 (maybe its just the q drop ng dose)and i cant really tell if theres a pattern to the song or if its randomness, but thats nothing importent unless ur playing at clubs but the main fix id make is the break down
5/5

TheBellmaker responds:

Thanks for the review! I usually don't toy with panning, I just think it sounds weird. Usually my songs don't have much pattern to them either. Three reviews for you coming right up

kicks are stronger! :D

i really like the chord progretion! :D

TimerClock14 responds:

Thanks man! Glad you liked it!

fav so far from me reviewing todaY!

drums need a bit more bass on some of them lol and to be a bit louder

sounds off but i cant figure out what hmm

i know that the part near 20 the flute was a bit random and alot of stuffs quite in this

NinjaTomatoes responds:

some things don't quite fit, but it's not completely finished - thanks for telling me what you thought about it

vary nice ^.^

could use a bit of work! transitions are odd and fast and the synths are fairly simple and eqing should be done a bit nice tho! 4/5!

Skullfy responds:

Thnx! Forgot to put "WIP" because I was so tired... -.- (hehe)

not bad!

im not to in classical, so the rest this wont help if u only like classical,
should have mixed bits and parts from the song in to this should have added kicks and what not played with filters alot so the song sounds more unique and like a genre of its own to stand out a bit better
3/5

nice.. purely nice!

i hear a tiney bit of feed back tho just a tiney bit tho!

i can tell ur new at this! :D

isent bad loops nice! but ur missing alot of stuff to fill out ill try my best to help!

vary catchy bass is okay
for starters ur missing pad sounds behind it so it fills vary empty

try adding more leads to this lead so it sounds bigger!

try layering kicks and claps to make more of a impact
kicks should have 1 for the main thump of the sound another to add a longer bass tail and another to blend the sounds
same for the claps but insted of bass one needs reverb

another thing bout the lead , play around with a low by pass filter or high
to fade in and out! makes transitions nice!
i do like the random bits and sounds,
should add hits and snare to the beats to help make the drums less empty!
theres lots to learn dont give up ! :D if ya need any help with anything pm me ;)
and coment on my stuff to ^.^

3/5

WAAAR responds:

thank you ill work on that you really helped me out man :)

nexus is fun :D

started vary epic i vary much enjoy this song / makes me think of a sonic game on the dream cast ! not much to say cos not much to improve

fix the filters make them more smoth

this sounds like it could be a good dubstep song but d and b tends to be faster tempo sounds more hip hopy

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