RandomDanceOfHappy's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Forest of Time]

sounds off but i cant figure out what hmm

i know that the part near 20 the flute was a bit random and alot of stuffs quite in this

NinjaTomatoes responds:

some things don't quite fit, but it's not completely finished - thanks for telling me what you thought about it

[The Vision by R0BOT]

vary nice ^.^

could use a bit of work! transitions are odd and fast and the synths are fairly simple and eqing should be done a bit nice tho! 4/5!

Skullfy responds:

Thnx! Forgot to put "WIP" because I was so tired... -.- (hehe)

[A little taste of it all]

i can tell ur new at this! :D

isent bad loops nice! but ur missing alot of stuff to fill out ill try my best to help!

vary catchy bass is okay
for starters ur missing pad sounds behind it so it fills vary empty

try adding more leads to this lead so it sounds bigger!

try layering kicks and claps to make more of a impact
kicks should have 1 for the main thump of the sound another to add a longer bass tail and another to blend the sounds
same for the claps but insted of bass one needs reverb

another thing bout the lead , play around with a low by pass filter or high
to fade in and out! makes transitions nice!
i do like the random bits and sounds,
should add hits and snare to the beats to help make the drums less empty!
theres lots to learn dont give up ! :D if ya need any help with anything pm me ;)
and coment on my stuff to ^.^

3/5

WAAAR responds:

thank you ill work on that you really helped me out man :)

[wild boom boom drummer]

coments and voteing are indeed important

i think u should up the tempo and take some of the random sounds out
add a bit more drums and it could be a good d and b song, but the songs vary random try and make some sorta pattern outta it! thin it can be amasing!

flashmakeit responds:

thank you for constructive advice
I well try and put it to use in my next audio

[A Way Out]

nice and full! :D

i really do like this ! normaly to much lyrics throw me off but it dosent in this;) befor 2:15 sounds like scremo if so it wasent good:/ but i love how you edited it XD
10 all the way!

Tissueboxhero responds:

Hahah i just threw some Glitchscreamzz in it and I can completely understand how some wouldn't like them .. .i thought it was cool though

Thanks for the review :) !!

[Need Your Energy]

hmm

0:32 everythings to loud so the sound sounds like it just died ,
i did not like the vocs at the start but they grew on me,
where you get vocs? or you make ur own ?
this is pretty amasing! :D
i love all the fx they fit nicely;)

Tissueboxhero responds:

Thanks for the review!! And i need to work on the 0:32 parttt but all of the vocals are from myself and my friend :)

[~|| Save the World]

now i shall play pokemon

1:13 seems a little off to high of a sound,

T-Free responds:

Great you mentioned that, I already edited that. Thank you :)

[Punkmetalguy - psYCho]

if you added dubstep to this

it be crazy!
its a nice and steady song! i like

punkmetalguy responds:

thanks for the good review:D i appreciate it.

[Techy Tracky]

what program you use?

this song sounds really glitchy like the melodys are audio clips that cut out everytime they start over it bugs me XD

try adding a reverbed kick and a reversed crash threw out the soung to have a nice work up and everything ;)

punkmetalguy responds:

i mostly use audacity. i get audio clips and record them sometims.

[Retaliation (RDB)]

you have me dancing in my chair! XD

one of the leads is to distortedXD the guitar sounding one ,
a smooth transition from distorted sound to cleaner would have been nice!

RobinDB responds:

Funny thing is it's not supposed to be a guitar, but it did end up sounding that way. haha. I might rewrite it with an actual guitar VST. Thanks for the review.