start seems a bit to static
mixing with the kicks is a bit off after that feels like theres a side chain and sound is dipping for the bass
1:00 bass comes in real nice here.
1:30 the sounds are fighting each other pretty bad here
1:48 sounds are blending together
2:20 i hear the makes of a good work up but once agen the sounds are overlapping pretty bad and its hard to make out
2:29 i wish the sounds stood out better here since this is the climax of the song.
2:30 wish the melody was different then the intro, or at least different lead
3:14 low quality sounds destroy the effect here
3:30 wish lead was compressed some and made wider .
4:16 songs a tad long :p
hope this review dose not seem to harsh overall its pretty good , seems like once you get a better understanding of mastering would be alot better but that takes time :3 grate work
Its long because its Original mix. But Thanks. Mixing it soon and i'll reupload it.
i find it hard to hear the vocs witch is displeasing with all the random glitch sounds
i would like to hear this song with some better mixing other then that im not to sure what to say .
good work keep it up
really nicelydone could always send me thefiles and ill electronic it up some ;3
really love the melody and lil gallops put in to this n.n its good work nice and complex not to sure what els i can say about this c.c
Whoo, thanks a lot :D
Great to hear you like this even if it is a bit short :3
mixings good n.n nice to hear proper mixing after the handful of reviews ive made :p
nice chill dnb lead needs to be spiced up some :p really wish the filter would drop off in to something deeper missing the bass x.x
but for what it is i like it
Thanks for the review, RandomDanceofHappy! :) I agree about the lack of bass tones. Several people have already mentioned that - I won't make that mistake again. The lead is just a preset from Wasp XT. I need to start making my own synths, haha. Thanks again! ;)
the filter at the start needs another filter as its slideing to drop the mids from peaking so much c.c
nice beat but needs sharper sounding drums to stick out more
the leads need to be touched back a tad
is a nice beat tho
Oh, so you're not gonna tell me to turn down the crash again? Because honestly that's the only thing I found wrong with this song on reflection.
You're either listening to these songs too loud or are using shitty headphones. I don't usually get this defensive about my songs, but I strongly disagree with your points.
crash is to loud agen and leads to high here and ur limiters pushing the highs down its kinda awk
dont let limiters do your mastering :p
the melodys really nice in this song
I didn't use any limiters, but okay.
Also, the crash sounds fine. I don't know what you're talking about. It's probably just your headphones.
i like the synth in the bq
mixings really off its hard to hear alot of the bg sounds
might wanna bring up the bass synth at the start
0:23 crash is to loud and needs a touch of reverb
as a hole the leads to loud needs to touch it back and bring out the key sounds in this lead sounds to preset also
1:02 this part sounds good ish aside from the crashes and pulls
1:10 the crashes to loud agen
the lead here is really nice and retro feeling i like this lead and melody but its a tad to loud
kicks need a tad more punch and bas more whomph to it c.c
I actually nailed the mixing on this one. Everything is just the way I wanted it.
The crash is NOT too loud. I bet you've probably just mixed your computer audio to boost all of the wrong levels.
vary intresting c.c key changes are kinda awkword a bit all over the place . dosent quite have a flow to it really if u made all the sounds this song would be a vary good starting place for makeing music n.n
Thanks for your review. I need to learn how to do efficient transitions and how to build up and drop it, maybe my wobbles are flat too. I will consider your recommendations
lets me review this one o.o c.c love the leads agen and hats a lot wish the glitches wher a tad more controlled :3 you have shown a lot of improvement since ive first started hearing stuff from you
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