RandomDanceOfHappy's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Snowfall]

sounds really nice on all lvs wish the bass was a bit tighter so i could hear the pitch differences clearer still sounds nice anyways :3 great work

Pandasticality responds:

thank you n__n! Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays. *throws Cookies*
- Pandasticality

[Trinity]

levels seem nice
seems to be a nice lil dance song you have going as far as a dance song this song seems vary nice
i personally dont like dance and would say make it more interesting by adding more leads more brake downs and what not
overall i wish i could leave a better review but ur mixing and eqing good mastering could use a tad of a touch up but other then that great job
~R4R~

Lethal-Input responds:

Thanks tho

[Toybox Groove]

fits the holiday
0-20 the melody is to changed dislike the layers here vary hip hop e ...
overall a nice little holiday submission

[Joyflight]

kick needs to be stronger at 0-50 melodys nice sounds basic but thats fine
1 38 theres a lil brake beat that sounds really nice
1 55 i like the difrence in the drums how they have a lil patterns in them overall this is pretty nice sounds really retro . vary good for a first submission
~r4r~

Mor1 responds:

Thanks for your review!

[Synthetic Undead Arising]

like the choice of sounds wish the song had more structure
0.35 sounds vary interesting
like the breakdown near 132
drum samples are nice but not fitting to the lead
r4r~~

Lich responds:

That's all good and well but could you actually suggest how your opinion of a better 'structure' would be? Why would you describe the percussion use as 'not fitting' to the arpeggio lead and not tell me why?

[Zelda; Gerudo Valley - Remix]

OKAYSSSSSSSSSSS first off i just started a remix of this song :p now for the review~~~
sounds like
0-08 kick needs to be changed to give more punch
0-24 leads not loud enough
0-30 both leads mix dont mix and sound to plane/
0-39 the sounds dont fit well here to much things happening
0-57 drops good pads sound to loud (or intros to quite more likely)
2-00 really long work up its nice but long the kicks herehave a prob where they dont mix well with the bass
you should put them in a mixer if not already there add a peak controler then on ur pads add something like a lbp and automate the mixing of the lbp to the peak of the peak controler

this will quite the pads when the kicks hit and if u tune it right so its just the bass it gives ur kicks alot more punch over overlying bass should be done with most stuff can also use this trick to make gate ish sounding parts
2-23 sounds like there is a off note
2 37 needs more of a break of emptyniss
2 40 parts dont have flow here needs rythem over all guitar sounds are nice
325 lfo gated sounds sound like they want to go higher pitch but are stoped
3 40 random much ? not sure whats with this part or how it links to the pad parts agen
430 im at the point of confuseon of the random sounds :p and the how i got here it sounds like i went to next another song :p
alot of nice sounds threwout the song and alot of lil stuffs wrong with it :p hope this helps and if u wanna know how to do anything i use fl also with hd nexus and ni massive
should check out my other songs :p

trunotfals responds:

WOW thanks for the great feedback, extremely specific. As I said I am learning and most of that and the abbreviations you are using i dont know what they stand for. i use FL studio with Harmor mainly, and could use a little bit more experiance. Everything is on the mixer board. Most everything is eq'ed on the mixer as well. Message me this was A LOT of help.

[Can't Save You]

eq and mastering is really bad no bass :/
and with newgrounds always put lyrics in author comments people are picky about that lol
melody repeats to much and seems like theres no real music structure to this song

[Leather Line Dance]

keep in mind for this review i dont prefer this style of song. and i dont listen to lyrics .
flow of song is good but doset have enough change in it so it gets bland to me
would prob like this alot better with better quality sounds and recording but mics cost alot for good ones

intros nice i feel like the kick used in this song dosent fit well in the mix eqing and pannings off to me

piano is a little awk at times
224 when the vocs come in there shoulda been a brake with lyrics to bring them in would help to brake the melodys
keep in mind when ur working with lyrics and melodys that the words / notes that are not there are just as impotent as the ones are there

none of this is ment to be harsh :p
mostly feel like this song just needs polishing

Kwing responds:

I see what you mean with me not switching up the flow here. I wrote this quite a while ago and only got to recording it more recently. Back when I made this, my focus was primarily on punchlines, decent rhymes, and a lot of condensed information which came at the cost of looking polished. Though, to a certain extent, I wanted my delivery to be consistent and unrelenting to express the apathy evident in the track.

Also: "and i dont listen to lyrics" Dude, WHAT? Why did you even bother listening? I mean, I think this is a good review and I still consider 4/5 to be positive, but why the heck did you sit through four and a half minutes of this if you weren't concerned with what I was saying? I'm mad confused.