RandomDanceOfHappy's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Clock - Stop and Think]

for sure epic!

some things bout this song thoo
i love how it is and everything!
kist noticed vary lacking in the bass end (the kick needs a little more umph)
i love the delay and stuff of the drums but theres no climax in this song its easy going all the way threw but i would have liked it to have had a climax and drums clear up some and be stronger.
but im sure the easy smothness would work well for peoples games. ut for that this would have to be longer or loop better!

TimerClock14 responds:

Yeah, this one was mainly a chill track. Not so much dubstep as plain chill.

I'll work with the kick! Thanks. :D

[Balding Handsome!]

heyyy o.o

do you have toxic iii ? cos i can make you awesome synth pack thing if you do! :D i make tuns of intresting synths :D
as for the song could use new synths and drums. ill gladly redo them if ya like

[Mindstomper - Chozen]

to shorrttt

haha first lison threw my head phones wher acting up and sounded like trash and ya XD
2nd time threw i love the bass could be a tish high tho

[Tired D&B]

not bad at all :3

lacks bass tho i like the cutting you did tho ^^ plenty of randomness :D
not much i can tell you cos this is not a type of music i make granted i do lison to it
but sounds perfect could tweek mastering a bit ^^

xxxZigZagxxx responds:

Thanks bro. Yes the cutting is funny. I mean, I didn't BUTCHER Adele, but I stuffed it up pretty well.

Yes, I'm not good at mixing/mastering.

-ZZ-

[YAYAYAYA]

omg i love this O.O

id like to make this in to a awesome song o.o
love the bass work :3 if ya can send me the flp for this (i know i just asked for the other one -.-)
i can make this awesome :D

xxxZigZagxxx responds:

I'll try and get that .flp to you. Not sure if I still have it, but I'll search :)

[Doobstep]

not to bad! :D needs alot of tweeking

and stronger kicks and more layering if ya like send me the flp and ill do all that nit picky work for ya :D(and give you the mp3 to do what ever with)

xxxZigZagxxx responds:

Yeah layering does the trick. I'd like to learn how to pick nits.

-ZZ-

[Intro (Gazing at People)]

ehhh

for starters 53 they both stop at difrnt parts so it kinda bugs me
thin when the drop hits its kinda week ... and outta place almost
along with that1 19 work up isent good enoughso it seems kinda rush
1 43 i love the drum beat hi hats a bit off tho.
love the cuts in the vocs
1 43 the vocs get louder with the synths kinda bugs me there
1 54 drops down a bit to fast and i lost all my groove
sorry for the huge list of things that buged me hope it helps
of yea and needs more bass :D always moorreeee basss

xxxZigZagxxx responds:

I appreciate that this isn't your style, but I thank you for listening and reviewing anyway. You're one of my biggest fans at the moment, as I am yours! One day I'll get around to reviewing all of your submissions!

-ZZ-

[Guitar House (WIP)]

ahh guitar feed backk

twitchhhhhhh twitch and theres some cliping!

i like the simpleness of this but could use more kicks and stronger synths!
i love the random dun dun dun
every now and thin
would be a awesome menu song thoo

xxxZigZagxxx responds:

Thanks bro for your feedback.

Yeah I used a built-in mic to record the guitar. That's why there's clipping etc, and feedback :) But yeah.

I'll try putting bigger drums in there, and synths. I'm also glad you like my random "dun dun dun" snare :) I like messing around with quantization to get a more organic feel. Thank you for your feedback!

ZigZag

[New Era [zigZAG]]

first thing is the

intro seems a bit glitchy like it just loops over agen o.o

yeaaa 100 im getting pretty bored
around 200 i like the new change but yea
the only thing i can think of is reallyyy old pop music from this XD 2 30 has some hope that its going to turn in to awesomeness :D
yeaaa i like this part better thin the start

[It's Tha Return]

awesome song for a gf

got this perfect only a few tweeks id do
0:17 + the lead that just came in should add a delay fx to it and make its panning go...

left left right left right right left right
and the delay stays on that side that be awesome :D

the main lead at 0 40 needs to be a bit louder!

and at the end id change the melody some drop it a note or something!

thin comes in the fact its a bit short.
but thats fine how it is:D

hope this helps some

xxxZigZagxxx responds:

Thanks for your feedback! I'll try to implement it, and then make it longer. I'm aiming for 3 minutes 30 :)

Thanks for the encouragement,
Benjamin