RandomDanceOfHappy's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Clock - Nostalgia]

53 was a great build up

i was wanting it to drop :( but nope.
ambient wise pretty good tho ^^
not much to improve on aside from the time

TimerClock14 responds:

Thanks!

[Clock - Happy]

drums are great and bassy

bg bass is a bit odd tho it seems to low like you played a sound and the aves are really long insted of bassy if that makes since?

TimerClock14 responds:

Yeah, the sub in the bg is really off tune which i noticed after the fact lol.

Thanks for the review!

[Clock - Trouble in Paradi]

drums got alot better now :D told ya the packs are

awesome XD

as for dub step its missing the wobbles XD and filth and all that
justs needs to be added. along with that a pattern should form around with that
so it repeats something ie chores ... not how its spelled but i think ya know what im going for..
the drums sound great but with out the wobbles it fills lacking .... lol repeating my self... but add a break down are stronger breakdown
for sure alot of stuff can be done to this keep working on it :D
ps 7 hours isent much my that im working on atm has 15 before i started eqing!
and that takes the longist for me (or its slowist filling )
cant wait to see this done XD

TimerClock14 responds:

Hahaha thanks for the tips. I completely forgot about the wobble. *facepalm*

But DAYUM, 15 hrs before even EQing!? that's nuts. I just spent 7 straight hours on this track, which is what I meant by 7 hours, but that definitely takes the cake. xD

[Trentonimo-Fur Elise]

hmm lacking but good idea for a song

intro needs a bit better work up so i cant tell the work ups happening at first ...
wasy fix... and hi hat fadeing in with longer strides at the vary start . and more filter work!....
after everythings in sounds really nice melody wise and sound wise ur just missing some pads.
another thing is theres no break down :/
hope ya can improve on this ^.^
good work

trentonimo responds:

Ill try lol but this was just my first little thing and it was very very basic as you can tell.... I have yet had time to improve my skills.

[Clock - Embark]

at 48 i was exspecting it to hit hard! :D

but its a odd fill fast pase melownesss? haha...your synths need more depth.
and you need a stronger lead

TimerClock14 responds:

More depth? Like adding some reverb or something?

And yeah, it's more of a chill track, if anything. :D

Thanks for the input! ^^

[Clock - Dead Carnival]

fun little tip! :D

hava kick sound rout it trew the mixer and add fruity blood over drive and turn pre amp to .55-.65 thin add fast dist thin play with that :D
(might haveta turn the kick down so its not loud)
but ud get crazy sounds if you do it :D

to the song! synths are okay try playing a bit more tho! :D songs missing treb so ya
bass is nice pads are good! :D add more random drum sounds revers crashes and big strong reverbed kicks and stuff add ahi hat play with panning and everything!
big tip to down say anything about zero bombing it for somereson makes people zero bomb more.... zero bombers are just people so bad at music they rate everyone elses stuff down so there song looks better and more people will look at it ... granted 90% of the time its horable

:S yup this helps some XD

TimerClock14 responds:

Lol. Thanks for the tips and review!

[Acid Paradox - Monster]

nice fx ;)

i was mad my song dident make the top 5 this week but this song makes me happy
theres not much for my taste on top 5 ...
mastering ... nothing clips not over bassy (granted thats how i like it)
fish there was more filth in it tho and everything

Acid-Paradox responds:

Don't get mad about not getting into top 5. Sure you get a nice amount of exposure but in the end, getting to the top 5 is like the lottery, It's matter of luck.

but if you still want to get into the top 5, i advise you to reupload your track and try again.

Awesome

[DJ Ravenline-Forever]

to make longer songs fallow this

intro ,chorus, brake down,work up, chorusagen , outro and you should end up about 4 mins easy -.- i have probs with staying under 5. you should check my stuff out if you can ^.^
5/5
hope that helped

ravenline responds:

thank you for the advice! :D ill definitely check your stuff out, and next time i make a song, ill try to follow that o:

[ClubALOO]

is short!

kick sounds and stuff sound like you could make it in to dub step cos there so dirty sounding hahaXD could use a tish of reverb tho

formermom responds:

ye some more reverb would make this sound sweet, I just wanted to make a wuick sweet loop:D

[Hard Seas and Maelstroms V2]

worth more thin 3.13 so ill give ya a 5!+.34

pesky 0 bombers! :D
not to much to improve on the song :D

OpenLight responds:

Haha thanks for the vote. This song was one of my first attempts at a song like this so forgive where it's rough around the edges haha.