RandomDanceOfHappy's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[1652 WiP]

i dis like the guitars panning

i cant make out the melody without like really tring to in iteasy fix would make it so the dips from each side dont go to 100% but to like 70 :p
after the intro there needs to be a pad or something!
but cant wait for this to be finished ^.^ keep me updated if you can :D
-MiB!-
only 6 stars cos i wanna see big inprovements in the final^.^
4/5

Zombiefrog responds:

i appreciate the review. i was having trouble getting a lot of things perfect, so at some point when my patience is a little better it should improve drastically. i'll take the suggestions into consideration.

- IIIQM

[[{ abYSs }]]

its such a pain not being able to save XD

i had fl 9 demo up till like 15 hours ago :) i dont regreat spending the 300$
this song has a vary simple fill to it :D but thats not bad :) you got talent just needs some polish!
-MiB!-

[[{ TraNSiTiONs }]]

im not a pro or anything :)

but i gotta lotta time in for how long ive had :) almost 3 mounths. first thing i gotta say is drums dont sound layered try adding 3 kick / 2 hats and stuff over each other !
this is not bad at all ^.^ i dislike the ending tho
i also dislike ur leads but the melodys are good!
-MiB!-
fill free to check my stuff out and let me know what u think ^.^

ajree210 responds:

Thanks for the tips man! Yeah I definitely have a lot to work on but I'll take it all into consideration :) I definitely know my leads are weak, it's sort of a trend with the latest stuff I've made so I'm working on that. I'll post up some more stuff in the future and you'll have to let me know whatcha think! :D Thanks again!

[Match Brandon [wsk]]

how wasent this on the top 5 yet?

i cant stop lisoning to this XD

wandschrank responds:

You don't have to stop! ;D

[Fresh Break <Seth>]

has such a mellow fill to this :D

i love this ^.^
im to hyper when i make songs to make stuff like this atm XD
2 27 fills like it runs on to long tho.
2 53 way to empty.
3 26 needs something to keep me focused in better cos everything fills like its dragging on and i lose focused
4 05 i like :D 4 20 i was expecting something a tish harder to hittt in XD
4 50 <3
5 48 i love that little sound in the bg :D
outro takes to long to get out tho
dont take anything i say to negitively i say this songs bout a 4.4 to me :) im just pointing out what i think XD
-MiB!-

[Fee Bee Ree Bees (Rave/Dubish)]

*happy flailing dance*

^.^ i think thats enough said!
5/5
10/10
keep it up !

Freefaller responds:

thanks man

[Revert <Seth>]

im going to start this as im lisoning cos this

song is quite long! and i dont want to skip around! :D
2 mins in and im likeing it :D
nothing to complain bout so far hmm2 46 ish i thought it was gunna get in to something harder :/ let down
3 40 the melody makes me happy agen ^.^
4 09 wasent a let down :D not as epic as id like but thats me! kinda catchyy! :D
6 min this brake downs been dragging on to long:/ 6 15 that random sound was like kinda outta no where
6 33 i dont like that lead sound but thats just me lol
7 40 i like how this is sounding XD plz no let down :P
8 15 i decided this was a let down agen:P
but i think its just me cos im in to more hardcore sounding music and this seems pregretional? idk XD
not bad ! needs a tish work i asome thats why it says 95% done overall i say its 4.8/5
-MiB!-
if you can check my stuff :)

SethKorn responds:

lol i like these kind of play by play reviews. they help alot.

and yeah i'm working my way up to more "hardcore" sounding house. haha. i need to get the trance aspects down first tho.. xD

I will change up some things, and yeahhh haha ;D

Thanks for the ten, even if the song wasn't for you :D

[i9incher-demons walk among us]

add a melody!

thin it would have got 5 ! 4/5
(there is a melody just ment make it stronger)

i9incher responds:

haha ok then. man, I am having to re edit this so much haha. but yeah I will keep that in mind.

[El Verde Pegajosa]

it is to confuseing and to simple!

the sounds are to simple and kicks and snares not complex anof
its confuseing cos it fills like you just maid the melodys off the top of ur head by putting randon keys and stuffx.x
theres little to no pattern in them if that makes since! but its not bad just needs work!

[Club Stomper]

epic!

needs more of a melody !

BMKikiBeats responds:

I agree 100% thanks!