RandomDanceOfHappy's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[MrPikkis - Breakbeat]

really simple but somehow deep!

i would add a little stronger lead near the end to change it up a bit i like the drums alot in this and just how simple this is overall just a tish to repetitive

MrPikkis responds:

Yeah, you're probably right :D but this is how it turned up, heh.

Thanks for the review :)

[A Contribution to Society]

hmmmm thinks fl?

sounds like the silver saw pre set i like the pads drums tish to simple for my taste but its pretty good for a first:D
check out my songs im fairly new :D this is my 4rth
listen/379623 :D
btw the arp seems like its talking to me x.x

[-=Distance=-]

review!

first thing 46 work up ends with nothing? :( just ends :0 no work on fadeing it out or anything? the sound itself was pretty good kinda sounds like it skips a part of the song the kickers round 50 are really good i like the simple pattern and at 110 the dubish sound you got going on sounds good as well:D 125 the little sounds that are there shortly where pretty cool:D could use more high sounds tho the arp u used sounds prettty good thin it works in that cool pad sounds its pretty epic im just was waiting for the melody after that to hit in to a really hard beat that i could jump around to but no :(
i like how it loops over tho could use a few touch ups
but nothing to bad ! first one i already stated at the top 2nd is the q sounds bad? like i cant really hear the bass or anything maybe its just me atm
and i love ur randomness sorry chezz and silly strings awesome
so you need a more punchy kicker! and the kicker sounds kinda flat
if you can check my new song out! :D
listen/379623
keep up the awesome work!

MiB!

[Ppr-Schlat]

lyrics are coverd up to much

this song sounds like ur just playing two song over eachother
the lyrics are fast passed while the music is slow try matching the timpos better and ya lyrics are coved to much -.-
overall i ident really like this but im not dunna bomb u for it 3:p outta 5

[[SRG] Fallout]

needs more of a work up!

thats just my thought and a few harder hitting sounds and stuff ^.^
sounds kinda house ish to me needs harder melody :D
:D
but overall it wasent bad at all:D
love the filtering between l and r
i liked the saw u used! and the violin
review my song if you want to ! it help if u dident under stand what i was saying at the start!
listen/379623

[-Glorious morning-]

my gf can play the intro in real life:D

i love it ! just needs to be longer and . thats it :D

[GavKay - Silence]

why so few hits?

its really good :)
but its missinga strong lead
the melody at 2 46 is wonderful but at 3 00 it should have had a a better lead mixed with it.
and theres parts where i can hear feed back comeing trew
and like the guy below 0 55 needs something to kick it off. as well as 2 59
but id add a new stronger sound at 259 as well!
Please return the favour an review and rate my new song
http://www.newgrounds. com/audio/listen/379623

[TM3 - Work In Progress]

ideas!

AT 38 secs that kick that pretty much starts the kicker needs another instrament at a higher or lower octave a think higher and leave the filter ing lower on the intro syth thin right there boost it clear it up! ive noticed trew ur songs u dont use many difrent sounds ! try mixing them up alot! my last song has alot of layers and sounds pretty epic at the end and at the end of this start a kicker with low subs every 8 thin 4 thin thin 2 have something with a filter like the intro and have it brake to a dif melody! :)and as it brakes make the sub 4 with a clap XD just telling ya what im filling !
love the kicker in this btw!

[TM3 - maybe shut up]

for being a mess i sure

do like it alot! dont sell ur stuff short ! this fills almost trance to me XD
if it had a stronger melody and syth it be trance to me!
i like what u did 2:01 alot ! should have worked a saw in to that! thin dubbled up the kicker! and add some stronger sounds and stronger to crash back down and in the bg fade in the first instruments! id love it thin and would have gave you 10 stars!
and i think ng needs more genres in the teckno part -.-
granted that only make it harder to deside witch one to put music in!
but back to what this is for :)
keep up the good work! u got skills!

[-=Hand Held=-]

could use a stronger melody!

thats about it:)
and mix some of the pad chords up and the beat a tish !
so ya :) this song could use some work! but im glad this sounds like a song! unlike most the stuff lately -.-
but u gave me hope to keep going trew the new stuff! good job
d-(^.^) z thumbs up!

FlaggedOnArrival responds:

Agreed, this song could use a little work. I'm glad you're still going through the new stuff RDH, and thanks for the thumbs up!

-=FoA=-