reallly!good
this is really good for your first ! you have pads witch most people miss when they first start
the only thing needing a touch up is that it needs a melody to fill more of the highs
the little melody around 1:50 dosentdo it for me it the notes blind a bit to much bost the atack!
maybe add a beat with the trumpit! kinda fallowing the drums hmm
and a tish more to the lows but thats just me!
im fairly new to this kinda music :D if you can tell me what u think of my songs! :)