RandomDanceOfHappy's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Tired D&B]

not bad at all :3

lacks bass tho i like the cutting you did tho ^^ plenty of randomness :D
not much i can tell you cos this is not a type of music i make granted i do lison to it
but sounds perfect could tweek mastering a bit ^^

xxxZigZagxxx responds:

Thanks bro. Yes the cutting is funny. I mean, I didn't BUTCHER Adele, but I stuffed it up pretty well.

Yes, I'm not good at mixing/mastering.

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[YAYAYAYA]

omg i love this O.O

id like to make this in to a awesome song o.o
love the bass work :3 if ya can send me the flp for this (i know i just asked for the other one -.-)
i can make this awesome :D

xxxZigZagxxx responds:

I'll try and get that .flp to you. Not sure if I still have it, but I'll search :)

[Doobstep]

not to bad! :D needs alot of tweeking

and stronger kicks and more layering if ya like send me the flp and ill do all that nit picky work for ya :D(and give you the mp3 to do what ever with)

xxxZigZagxxx responds:

Yeah layering does the trick. I'd like to learn how to pick nits.

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[Intro (Gazing at People)]

ehhh

for starters 53 they both stop at difrnt parts so it kinda bugs me
thin when the drop hits its kinda week ... and outta place almost
along with that1 19 work up isent good enoughso it seems kinda rush
1 43 i love the drum beat hi hats a bit off tho.
love the cuts in the vocs
1 43 the vocs get louder with the synths kinda bugs me there
1 54 drops down a bit to fast and i lost all my groove
sorry for the huge list of things that buged me hope it helps
of yea and needs more bass :D always moorreeee basss

xxxZigZagxxx responds:

I appreciate that this isn't your style, but I thank you for listening and reviewing anyway. You're one of my biggest fans at the moment, as I am yours! One day I'll get around to reviewing all of your submissions!

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[Guitar House (WIP)]

ahh guitar feed backk

twitchhhhhhh twitch and theres some cliping!

i like the simpleness of this but could use more kicks and stronger synths!
i love the random dun dun dun
every now and thin
would be a awesome menu song thoo

xxxZigZagxxx responds:

Thanks bro for your feedback.

Yeah I used a built-in mic to record the guitar. That's why there's clipping etc, and feedback :) But yeah.

I'll try putting bigger drums in there, and synths. I'm also glad you like my random "dun dun dun" snare :) I like messing around with quantization to get a more organic feel. Thank you for your feedback!

ZigZag

[It's Tha Return]

awesome song for a gf

got this perfect only a few tweeks id do
0:17 + the lead that just came in should add a delay fx to it and make its panning go...

left left right left right right left right
and the delay stays on that side that be awesome :D

the main lead at 0 40 needs to be a bit louder!

and at the end id change the melody some drop it a note or something!

thin comes in the fact its a bit short.
but thats fine how it is:D

hope this helps some

xxxZigZagxxx responds:

Thanks for your feedback! I'll try to implement it, and then make it longer. I'm aiming for 3 minutes 30 :)

Thanks for the encouragement,
Benjamin

[Clock - Liquid (WiP)]

its good to break away form the norm :D alot

can be done to this and would be a truely awesome song
melodys really great :D untill the drop that is! :D un till the drop its perfect
after theres so much going on the new lead has a few off notes and id prefer it to be a bit dif o.o the break is pure awesomeness also o.o just pure awesomeness o.o
1 55 needs some tweaking to fit it together better!
drums need more of a 1 2 3 4 kick to make it more dancey in my taste :D

but yea this hasta be my fave song so far ~ 3 14 = awesome.

if ya dont mind id like to work with this :3 to make it more of a dance hard core song :D :3

but yea best song so far 10/10 all the way :D

TimerClock14 responds:

Thanks! :D

[Clock - I'm In Space]

hmm :D

work ups nice :D playyy with more filters tho! love 1 25 :D
no headphones on atm but the bg sounds sound off with out them -.-
<3 <3 <3 breakdown :D lead there should filter in tho low by pass...
lookl up portal 2 :D theres a pack from the game thats like im innn spaccceesss and other space stuff that might make it more intresting endings not to great tho :/
like it just stops for sure getting better :3 ill dl to check this on my headphones ;3
and btw haveing a work up at the begenings perfectly fine :p it makes the song proper so good job XD keep up the great work ;) and keep me updated with ur music :3

TimerClock14 responds:

:D Thanks! I always feel like I've actually done a good job when I get a good rating from you. Glad you liked it! I think that stuff like this and Alarm and Zombies are where I'm strongest in my music, so I think I finally know what I do best.

I have been playing around with filters and stuff, but I don't like any of the VST's I have now (mostly the default FL plugins) so I am going to spend some time this weekend to look for a really good filter VST that I like.

[=SnowDay=]

kicks need more punch

atleast to me.
lead before 54 needs a bass synth backing it up o.o
you should run this threw a eq and slightly boost the high ends drop the mids a tiney bit and boost bass/low bass :D ... justttt a tiney bit tho :D love the part 2 20 :3 keep the awesome work up!

Daydream-Anatomy responds:

Will do:3
thanks for the review.

[Clock - Experimenting]

its not video game haha

its misc. haha XD
the lack of fallowing scales dose bother me near the end with the bass wobbles sounds nice! and the off key notes fit a bit there but the intro and everything should be in key XD
should check scales out for sure tho they make everything sound perfect and stuff

TimerClock14 responds:

BLARGH! These genres are so confusing! ajf;sldkjasldkfjaslkdfa

Thanks for the tips though. :D