RandomDanceOfHappy's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Adjeye-3 ~ Sentivicated.]

hmm

1 30 the drums are a tish to simple for my taste
1 50 this is a bit long for a workup / intro and its to relaxed to be the main part of the song for my tastes
was exspecting more of a drop at
0:58 as well
2:30 really could use more synths to make the song sound deeper
3:20 is sounding nice paino could use tweeking so it dosent sound comp maid
3:23 this change is vary nice nice and bassey to but the paino dosent sound to great with it id fade it with some synths and stuff .
4:15 that repeated a bit to much and thats a bad place to end the song after a huge long work up ,
fairly good hope that helps you some :D
5/5 8 outta 10

Adjeye responds:

Hmmm thanks for this awsome review!

[Clock - Weight (WiP)]

im not fond of this XD

may be cos im kinda sick tho:( leads to sharp and stuff XD kinda hurtsss :3
i would like to see you try a mostly bass song with big long bass lines and relaxed fill;3 it be a change from your normal style

TimerClock14 responds:

I'll give it a shot. Big long basslines, and what does relaxed fill mean? You mean like a long subbass under some drums?

[[Phobos]*]

portal ... turret

insta 10 / 5 for that :D not that it wasent worth it to start with -.- once agen pretty flawless ill check the rest your stuff when im not all tone def so i can give a real review ^^

Solkrieg responds:

Aha, thanks.

[[Song of Storms Dubstep V]

amazing :3

i kinda used this in a mix i was working on ^^
hope ya dont mind ill give ya credit and link it back here ^^

Solkrieg responds:

Alright thanks, just shoot me a PM when it's finished :D

[[Lavender Town Dubstep]*]

lets go to lavender town by 28

is better but this is hella good ^^ i was going to remix this song till i found that remix XD you should check it ;)

Solkrieg responds:

I couldn't find the song you're talking about.

[Clock - Zombies!]

lol a bit to tired to make a good review but ill

try XD
over all pretty good start to the song :D ambient parts to dry and neeeds more or to be shortend drums are nice and crisp :D looped great witch alot of people can use in games and stuff XD
could use a better melody tho with this and play with the talking bass line to

TimerClock14 responds:

Thanks man. :D Yeah, I gave up on the pad after a while cuz I couldn't make it work quite right. But I like it the way it is now.

[Clock - Frozen Shenanigan]

not going to get a high score with just 7 seconds

but yea its catchy make it repeat 4 times thin a break down for 4 more thin loop that ;)

TimerClock14 responds:

Oohh...I'll definitely give that a shot. Thanks!

[Clock - Escape Plan]

all your money belongs to us

0:28 neds more stepy fill XD gallop it maybe :D
1:04 needs a better melody :3 but sounds great :D till around 1 24 the outta tune slide dosent sound to good to me any ways :D bass is nice but fills like the same thing over and over
1 56 :D love that sound but 2 08 i dont like it so much need to make drums a tish louder at this part 2 28 needs more high ends look up some gabber stuff :D i fill like that would make this song that much more awesome :D

TimerClock14 responds:

Thanks for yet another very helpful review!

[Clock - Alarm]

for sure one of your better songs :D

fills like its a real song but needs some work :D i think i nice hard core touch is needed + better melody :D drums are great needs some mastering tho talking bass lines needs to be changed a tiney bit :/ its not as talky as it should be after the intro buled ups nice needs more melody :D 2 30 lfos not all that loud so it sounds like its missing stuff
;)almost worth a tin

TimerClock14 responds:

Thanks man! Yeah, the LFO at 2:30 is really quiet and I couldn't figure out how to make it louder and still sound the way I wanted it to. :\

It's funny because that synth started out as my epic fail of an attempt to make a bass cannon, and still turned out nicely.

[Clock - Afternoons]

hmm :D i waana work with this flp me ;) ?

could use alot of fx filtering masters pretty good :D def needs more filters tho and paning work :D

TimerClock14 responds:

Thanks!

Yeah. I think I'm progressively getting better at mastering. :D

Panning makes me dizzy. :D But I LOVE it.